Nice flow of thoughts. A balanced article about the pros and cons of friendship. However, need to work on Grammar and Vocabulary. I am not sure how spacing has come up in the sentences.
The title seems to suggest that this is an article about some specific friend. But actually this is about friendship.
I would say a good try. Keep writing and improving,
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