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Review by Northwood
Rated: E | (3.0)
A sincere, heart felt recount of a daily routine that is necessary for life itself.

Powerful, life saving, essential.

But it just feels a little uncomfortable.
It's a stuctually sound poem, but it's not poetic.

It doesn't sing to me. It doesn't draw sympathy or empathy from me.

I like it more for its conformity than its creativity.
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Review of AWAKENING SOUNDS  
Review by Northwood
Rated: E | (3.0)
You need to perform this one, rather than let someone read it.
Having tried to read it I feel like I'm talking in tongues.

If you read this to me, I'm sure it would sound great.

I didn't understand this, but it doesn't mean I wouldn't appreciate it if you did it as a performance poetry piece.


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Review of Broken  
Review by Northwood
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this and you can have 4.5 stars.

That's it. I like it.

But it's doing my head in!

Okay, would it be better if 'could' in the third line was 'can?'

After all, if 'could' stays as 'could' and you change 'love' in the first line to 'loved,' you screw up the 9th line.

It's a dilemma.

But it might be right as you have it. I don't know. I'm not smart enough to know.

But I like it and you can have 4.5 stars.
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Review by Northwood
Rated: E | (4.0)
You just summed up wisdom.
The E=MC Squared of literature, but with more syllables.

Its a good quote, and I'm surprised it hasn't received a rating 'till now.
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