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Review of Oin  
Review by Paul.pk
Rated: E | (5.0)
Brilliant! I'ma numbers man at heart and this is clever, insightful and unique. Grabbed my attention straight away and the quirky clever writing had me smiling.
No idea how you came ups with this idea but if you read this and get a chance please let me know. I'm intrigued.
Full 5 starts not only for the writing but for the very very unique nature of this little piece.
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Review of The Mystic Winds  
Review by Paul.pk
Rated: E | (4.0)
If you wrote this when you were 10 then all i can say is well done you. It reads well and works. The short chapters are actually refreshing and if i were you i would revisit and revive this but rather than chapters make them days of a diary. So day 1 we did.... then day 2... etc etc.
Im rating this for ten years old and have to say other than very few punctuations its great
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