You've expressed my own opinions here. Writing is my love and it appears that you share it too. Your last paragraph in particular is interesting, when you make the refrence to how a mother loves her child. Writing is giving yourself to something, it is baring your soul to people that you don't know. I like the way you've worded this in particular.
Good job and keep writing -but I'm sure I don't have to tell you twice!
I love poetry, and being a hopeless romantic, I love romantic poetry even more. But, it is really difficult to find love poems that aren't sappy and poorly written. This is hardly the case with this poem, the iambic pentametre is well done, the rhyme scheme perfect and it is obvious that this poet is very talented.
As a huge Orlando Bloom and Johnny Depp fan (not to mention the Lord of the Rings and Pirates of the Caribbean) I must say that I was very amused by this lovely little piece. It seemed to me to be quite satirical, what with the All-Knowing Monkey and the psychotic bunnies. I full recommend this story to anyone who wants a bit of swashbuckling adventure (some darker comedy) and loves Orli and Johnny!
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