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Review by plandara
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thanks for this very informative writing and editing advice. I found it extremely helpful. I often find myself making grammatical errors. To be honest no matter how many time i review some of my work i often make the same errors over and over again.

Thanks again

Plandara
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Review by plandara
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think, every body wants to find hidden treasure where they least expect it.

This is a nice short piece. It's simple and to the point. I like how you told your story with very little description.

The only thin that confused me here was the cameo necklace. Whats the relevance to the story?

Great, job.

Plandara
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Review of Your Today  
Review by plandara
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a fairly good poem. I like your poem's straightforwardness and simplicity. The last line however is a bit cliche Because your today is a gift That's why they call it the present. I have found this saying to be over used. But other than that its a good piece of work. .
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Review of MAJESTY'S SPAWN  
Review by plandara
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow I loved your story. Great concept, nanobots. I think you should continue to add to this piece,I think it could be great.

Good job, your friend.

Plandara
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Review of Chance Encounter  
Review by plandara
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I love the passion you have instilled in this short piece of art. Good work.
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Review by plandara
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you. your words are soothing and kind. I take much of my life to seriously and I need to give more. thanks for the perspective. Kindness however small is truly beautiful.
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Review by plandara
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is way to descriptive. good work
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