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Review by pookah1111
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great short story. I liked the twist at the end. I really think that your writing is very good. The beginning part was very descriptive and I could actually feel the emotion that you were trying to get across. I'm trying to think of something negative to say about it but I can't. I thought it was great.
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Review by pookah1111
Rated: E | (4.0)
Here are some typos that I found in the article:

Today, I was sitting of the soft casually watching the action

Quickly, he started wishing himself and pretending he hadn’t been waiting for birds

I really enjoyed it. I can honestly tell you what you alread know. When you have cats - NOTHING IS SACRED! They love to lay on it, climb on it, walk across it, or pee on it. Still they can be a lot of fun.
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Review by pookah1111
Rated: E | (4.5)
The journal entries were very entertaining. I could see someone making a short file about Fred the cat. I have cats of my own and I know exactly what she is talking about when she says she is on the phone and the cat is playing with her. Also I have seen my cats put their paws under the bottom of the door and try to pull it open. It is the funniest thing until you are trying to sleep, then it's not very funny at all.

Good writing. I will definately read the next installment.
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