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Review of Popcorn!  
Review by PrincessDiana
Rated: E | (3.5)
Not that this matters, but i love popcorn so thanks for making a poem about it :). However, it does become a bit confusing on the first stanza. When you write about the right side up and the right side down you lose the reader a bit. Also you don't really move the microwave back to zero because the time is over.
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