I thought your poem here was beautiful. Such a sweetly written piece of work. The rhymes and rhythm were perfect to me. There was a natural beauty, a heavenly presence in each word and line. A simple title. I loved and enjoyed every word. You have done a wonderful job here. Great work and write on!
I thought this little poem from you was nice and simple. The message was very clear. There was great positivity in this poem. I know this was written a few years ago but I hope the poem still stands today. An enjoyeable read. Nice presentation too. Good expressions. Write on!
Good expressive tone to this writing from you. I liked the title being used in the poem. I was gripped to each word and line. A deep, meaningful poem and it kept my attention high. You have good creativity in your expressions. Good, deep writing. Write on!
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I was gripped to each word and line. I liked how the words finally came to you in this piece. I think you spoke for many writers here. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. There was a good tone to this work. Write on!
Nice expressive tone in this piece from you. A good, loving note for a lover. I wonder if they have read this poem? I enjoyed the romantic power and the amount of care in your words and lines. A sweetly written and executed item. Good work and write on!
I enjoyed reading your writing through. I liked the angle in which you wrote this out. You expressed yourself very clearly here. A deep and effective item. It seems like you were in a difficult situation here. Fact or fiction, I hope things go well. Good writing and write on!
Nice expressive manner to this poem. I liked your writing style here. Good presentation on the page. A deep and effective piece from you. I enjoyed reading this through. Your creativity was good. I found no way to improve the writing. Good work and write on!
A well chosen title for this little poem. I enjoyed reading this through. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I also thought this whole item was very poetic and well expressed. I liked the feeling I recieved as I read this through. Nice, interesting work. Write on!
A very well written item here from you. I enjoyed the positive end to this writing. I related very well to everything you said because I have been there too my friend. You are right, in the depths of loneliness we do find our own path to walk. Great writing.
I found your little poem here to be very emotionally written. The imagery coming from each word and line was great but darkish. Your descriptive manner was perfect, you set the scene very well. I enjoyed reading this through. It was a good read. Write on!
You expressed yourself very well here. A dark, twisted kind of poem but still enjoyable to read through. I liked your creativity and in some ways, I could relate to what you had written out. A good length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. Nice work and write on!
I enjoyed reading your item through. I liked how well you expressed yourself here in this poem. Anxiety is not a nice feeling so I sympathise with you. You were very creative with this item. I am glad you have coping procedures. Good work and write on!
I enjoyed reading your work through. You made me smile as I read this through. You were very creative in the way you wrote this poem out. I liked the style. The very last line was emotional to me, and a slice of reality. Good writing, keep going and welcome to writing.com. I too am from the United Kingdom. Write on!
Nice presentation, centered on the page. A good item to read through. I liked the angle you wrote this out with. There was an honourable feeling over me as I read this through. I think most army men will think like this. To be so proud of their country. Good work and write on!!
I enjoyed this little poem from you. It made me smile. You made me want to celebrate God even more than I do already. Nice form used, good presentation, nice font too. The length of the poem was good, it kept my attention levels up high. You also managed to say so much in just a few lines. Good work and write on!!
I thought your acrostic here was lovely. Well written and well displayed. There was a sweetness about this piece, describing nature in the form of a bird in Spring. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the title, summing up the theme very well. Good work and write on!!
Nicely written out and nicely presented. Good font used, it looked good. A lovely poem, nice flowing rhymes. Good poetic words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. The title is inviting and matched the writings well. You are a good poet. Write on!!
I really liked the poetic sway to this little poem. I liked the effect this gave me as I read it through. It seemed to reflect my mood right now. Great imagery coming from each word and line. Nice writing, good job and a enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. Write on!!
I thought this poem from you was deep and dark. I like how you expressed yourself here. Writing things down and turning them into poetry is a helping release for the mind and soul. I hope you felt better for writing this poem. Love can be cruel sometimes.
Lovely expressive manner to your poem here. I liked the deepness of the meaning. Nice flowing structure in this writing. I enjoyed reading this through and it was a nice experience to me. Sad and emotional but very rewarding. Great writing and write on!!
I enjoyed this little poem from you here. Its length was perfect, you managed to say so much in just a few lines. There was a great poetic power over me as I read this through. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. Great writing and well done!!!
I thought your writing here was great. A very good theme with great meaning and emotions. Nicely presented, centered on the page. You managed to say so much in just a short poem. I agree, our lost ones will reach out to us, we just have to be ready and waiting to see this. Nice work and write on!!
I really liked the theme of this poem from you. It was very deep, special and spiritual. The meaning was great. You wrote this out very well and no errors were found. I was incaptivated as I read this through. You really do have a great imagination here. Great writing and write on !!
There was a sad and heart-felt tone to your writing here. You opened up my eyes to what you go through every day and every night. A special poem from you, describing night time with so much power. No way to improve the writing, it is fine the way it is. God Bless you.
I thought this little item from you was amazing. I loved the philisophical power used here. The imagery that came of the words and lines was awesome. The title was fitting for the writing. This is the best piece I have read today. I loved the overall feeling you gave me here. I am very impressed with this item from you. Amen and write on!
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