i liked it. to me it shows a relationship between father and son that was not strong but in the end it turns out to be a little closer than before. you should make a continuation. i would love to read more of your work. keep on writing and hope to read more of your stuff really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It may seem short, but I wouldn't underestimate the poem. It really got me thinking and wondering what does it really mean to be me. Some people may not know it, but I believe that if they read this poem they will be deeply effected like I was. Keep on writing!! I would love to read more of your work in the very near future!!!!!!!
I love the idea. You should write it no matter what people think or say. In the long run you might even get it published, you never know. So I say just write it, i'll read it, and i'll review it. I think it will turn out great.
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