Posperous Snow,
My friend, your poem reminds me of getting caught in a thunder storm, without an umbrella. I enjoyed your words you used to write it with.
Dev Fine,
My friend, I'm sorry to hear you are down in the dumps with your depression. Yes, sometimes we have to go a little farther to overcome life's adversities. but, with God all is possible and likely to carry you along with Him and give you the help you need.
Queens
AmyD23,
My friend, I guess we all need to loose weight if you think about it. Sorry to hear about you losing your job over nothing. Hang in there and you will prevail through it all and good health. Thank you for telling us your sad story about losing your job.
Queens
~MM~,
My friend, this story of the winter garden is quiet distasteful with the words you used to write it with. I could think of a better way to spend my time in the garden. But, thank you for the horror of the story. I found no errors at all in the story.
Queens
WhiteWolfGirl,
My friend, I read you story about the wolves, Ajax and Cassandra and their ordeal in the cold. Ajax must be a mean wolf because she ate the Groundhog just because she wanted it warm. Thank you for sharing this story with me here on writing.com.
Queens
Umayaal,
My friend this is a beautifully written article, my friend, true, true, true, as the day is long. If only people practiced what you have said, in life what a wonderful place it would be.
Thank you for the nice and beautiful read. I found no errors in its entirety.
Queens
LittleLambie,
My friend, Yes, the Eskimo is like the American Indian, lost in their own land. The only critical difference is the weather and its bitter cold and discomfort. Thank you for sharing this poem about people who get very little respect by others.
Queens
Connieann,
My friend, Yes, do you know what the Native Indians call the wind? Mariah. This is a short but, well worded poem, my friend. You declare what you want and that is all you want to write.
Thank you for sharing this with us here on writing. com.
Queens
Amrita,
My friend, Let me tell you that true love does exist. I been married for 52 years to the same man and we are still in love. I was 16 and my husband was 22 at marriage so love does exist.
Thank you for your input on love though. Thank you for sharing this story with me.
Queens
Jace,
My friend, you are never to old to learn, my friend. I dabble in poetry but, I can't say I go beyond the typical poems such as rhyming quatrains usually four of four in a stanza. This poem has its good points it certainly is easy to read. Thank you for sharing it with me.
Queens
Bumblegrum,
My friend, this poem is well worded with unique words that speak your feelings and intention. A nice read for someone who likes the older English written in a poem about the sea. Thank you for sharing this poem with me. I found no errors in its entirety.
Queens
AmyD23,
My friend, I feel for you having to get everything ready for cleaning. On a Sunday night that makes it bad as for time to prepare everything for Monday. Thank you for reminding me about when I had to work. Thank you for sharing your story with me.
Queens
Empalgarse,
My friend, I don't know anything about a playwright or plays. So I will review you on your words you have written. You told the other person what you wanted and I guess you done it. Your write was short and I found no errors in its entirety. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Queens
jardane,
My friend, Your story of James the football player and the shortest player on the team is interesting. I bet James tried harder to play than anybody else on the team, too? Your story is good to read for young players who feel insecure about their abilities.
Queens
Empalagarse,
My friend, I can think of a few times I've thought of that, my friend. Time and redheaded women make the world go around. Not blondes, but redheads make the gentlemen take notice. Thank you for the nice uplifting poem about women. I found no mistakes at all in its entirety.
Queens
Empalagarse,
My friend, the words in this poem are beautiful especially the way they are written. I must admit that I didn't understand all of the poem per say. What I did understand was very interesting and well written. Thank you for sharing this poem with me.
Queens
G.B. Williams,
My friend, Yes, if the truth were known we would all be thanking the Lord for our blessings. All we have to do is look around us to see so much suffering especially by kids. God be with you, my friend for your faith in the almighty and love.
Queens
Fyn,
My friend, This poem is wisely written with its great mention of strong feeling. In a way it seems like it is an old Indian poem speaking of the earth. I enjoyed reading it and it flowed good with no mistakes. Thank you for sharing it with me, my friend.
Queens
Candy,
My friend, Your poem is real short, but it says a lot especially to an orphan. This is a sweet well written poem with your love all over it. Mother's what would we do without them, my friend. Without mother's there would be no babies and nobody to keep the dad's home.
Queens
JessCarsen,
My friend, I can imagine what that guy thought when he walked bye after seeing you all. Sometimes you get caught up in a situation that can't be corrected. I would imagine you guys all having backpacks also raised suspicion. Thanks for the read, my friend.
Queens
Cynaemon,
My friend, I'm sorry for the hurt you must be feeling over your kitty. I recently had to put my dog down after having him for 14 years. So I know how it feels to loose an animal. I hope you find a way to overcome the pain of loosing it. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Queens
Tim Chiu,
My friend, Yes, sometimes this old world gets messy and hard to cope with. I guess we all have to deal with our families stress and the stress laid upon us. The memories of love will never slip away it is there to stay and manifest, my friend.
Queens
Justin,
My friend, your words speak reality about this individual that you must know well? If they are true and I believe they are I hope you tell everyone. A person of that character should be ratted out as much and as fast as possible. I found no errors in your story at all.
Queens
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