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Review by Ray Corbin
Rated: E | (4.5)
Netty,

Wonderful poem. I particularly like the third line "Pearl of soul claims its beauty to be behold." It just sounds lovely.

However, I do see one mineor error in the first line. In the sentence "The rainbow rays fills the sky with vibrant colors," the rays are the subject; therefore, I'd change the form of the verb "fills" to "fill."

Besides that, you have a great, uplifting poem. Keep on writing!
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