You write very well. I can easily see this page as the introduction of a book or a novel. Then again, you wrote this down from an actual dream that you had? A warning dream. You woke up feeling alone and very much afraid. God is Truth, Jesus is Wisdom, teaching Knowledge & Understanding. We need Knowledge as to not be deceived. God was with Jesus the Word from the beginning of time. https://www.kingjamesbibleonline.org/1611_John-Cha... If you want an insight to the meaning of this dream, just read the Book of Daniel, here is a link. https://www.kingjamesbibleonline.org/1611_Daniel-C... The Bible and God is as real as your dream. remember while reading that the letter J is I and the letter V is U etc. Only trust the 1611 KJV as a reliable source of God's Word. Let me suggest one important thing. Tonight as you lay down your head in bed... please ask God to forgive your sins and promise to Him that you will not do them again. Tell Him that you are sorry, so very sorry for sinning and then tell Him that you believe that He sent His Son to cleanse you of your sins. Pray this every night... until you feel better about God. You need to Love God with all of your Heart, Mind, Soul & strength. If you can learn, then you can earn this peace you speak about in your work. You are on a journey my friend and I hope I gave you a place to start. Seek and you shall find. Prayer changes things. The Bible teaches us that we are not alone and we shall fear nothing except God and His furious wrath... simplified... repent and believe in Jesus. This is the Key to the door of Peace. FAITH ♥♥♥
One can never write enough about God, I was charmed to read your thoughts. You wrote of the Bliss that never stops, emotions, they come right out of this work from your touching choice of words that flow rather well even smooth, but somehow you put some bounce in there.
I relate to the words "A Time Of Truth". I love that part. I really do feel in the Present time that is exactly where we are. Like you said A Time Of Truth.
Very nicely placed, each word, that as I finished, left me content to be waiting for our ever. Bravo, Write On God awaits.
BRAVO
you nailed it
That was a sweet treat for my eyes to read. I just love these kinds of poems. It's the way you have worded it that makes it so appealing to me. I love how you mixed up what Autumn brings into our lives as a child and as adults.
I share your love for Autumn, Your Autumn poem was a delight.
It led me on into a magical moment of this magical season,
To me, you bring something out, lost as a kid, about Autumn. What you focused on brought a smile and a memory of Autumn long past. I think it could of been longer, with more views that mingle & express why you love the season that you were born into.
Thank you, for I admire your view. I hope to write a poem about Autumn. This has inspired me so, too.
I enjoyed the witty way in which it was worded. Thought out Cleverly then laid out with the hint to question everything. Each section was a lesson on what to and not to do. The simple yet effective way to ponder a little longer. Take more time to notice, view from every angle, & investigate into whatever it is in general. I see the message clearly any criticism, is good criticism when it opens up the eyes. Very enjoyable, however, I was wishing it would keep on going. Keep up the great work. So poetically put with lots of Wisdom. Bravo.
A great personal poem all the way through. I noticed you didn't mark the genre of this poem as personal.For I thought it was very personal, and are indeed the hardest to write about. You definetly gave it an appropriate name.
You wrote this from the heart, with a gifted technique for expression. I liked the way you described feelings for just what they are. I also liked the way you envisioned the little everyday moments that still linger inside.
I knew I was drawn in, from having had a similar situation happen. It had me crying half way into the poem.
You have made a fine example of how one can let their own emotions be the captain of their life boat, as you have shown the theraputic benefits that it holds.
I want to point out also how honesty plays an important role as it strengthens what is shared between a mother, son and daughter.
This poem touched me to my soul. You have shown us the best writers, write from the heart. You have given me a new goal. Keep writing and Thank You for sharing your wonderful gift for words.
I like the strength and confidence this poem sends out. It says so much with just a few words. It allows one to see a relationship between the author and his God, which is strong. You wrote it well, with an insight you managed to put in its proper perspective. Thanks for sharing and showing this Gem.
An excellent idea for a poem, I thought, maybe you are a bird watcher. I also thought it was very original.
It has a great flow to it with witty wording. It has the cuttest storyline that made me laugh all the way through it. Perfect for a child's type of entertainment; as well as adult's too. It made me happy while reading and sort of sad too for the little birds. You really put personality into the characters, quite charming. I liked it just the way it is. It is a favorite for me, as I see our styles of writing are similar. I love stories with happy endings. You definetly have a clever way of rhyming that to me is what made this little story-poem so delightful. Thankyou for sharing.
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to read your thoughts. You wrote of the Bliss that never stops, emotions, they come right out of this work from your touching choice of words that flow rather well even smooth, but somehow you put some bounce in there. 
BRAVO 
