I very much enjoyed reading this. I like the humour and it is not unlike my way of thinking. I think it is brilliant that it challenges main stream religion and involves several different ideologies. Well done on it, very imaginative and readable. Ha, split pea soup!
You have done well at describing the reactions, duties and personalities of each member of the family in such a small poem. You have used emotive words and made the characters relatable with just a few words so I think you have done a rather good job.
I like it. You have done well in personifying aspects of the mind and expressing the balance between logic and imagination. I also enjoyed the contrasting emotions that the character experiences. I am likely to draw on this poem for ideas of my own. Thank you>
Could you please tell me what is being said here. It's not that it's bad, I'd hate to give that impression but I can't quite work out the exact meaning of this and because of my condition, I am seriously disgruntled whenever I don't understand a story of poem.
'The lonely'...it reminds me of something I cannot place. This is a striking piece because of the unsettling bleakness it carries with it. I know how this feels as well so it connected with me, on a number of levels. I believe that this is reminiscent of some really old book.
Excellent! You have done very well at conveying messages and emotion in such a short piece of writing. Was this for a contest, that is the only reason I can think of for it to have the number of lines written at the bottom. Anyhow, this is good for me because it is a particularly turbulent time in my life. thank you.
That's kinda creepy. I love the innocence of the child being put together with the eeriness of the situation. You have done well in conveying the general message and setting with such incapacitating limits. I like it. A lot. =^_^=
This is very good. I think it is great that people can convey such strong emotions that mirror real life in such a short poem. I can see how it also carries the message that people shouldn't be bound by traditions if they cause harm and the small spark of rebellion at the end. I would like to know if something inspired you to write this or if it came naturally. =^_^=
This seems rather odd to me. It is good, but if I were to choose my least favourite piece out of all of your's, I would choose this. I am only saying that because it is less deep and touching than the others. Mind you, I am bias because I used to be really bad at these in primary school so don't allow my pathetic grudge get you upset.
I love this poem! It is so very deep and spiritual. I enjoy the end that says that we all go to the same place. I have left your acrostic poem till last because I didn't quite know what to say about it. If you have time, could you perhaps do something longer? It's just that I love reading things that I can really submerse myself in. I have nothing against your short pieces though! =^_^=
Although I don't, entirely, understand what is going on in this, it is very soothing. Reading it made me feel almost spiritual and calm. May I ask what is meant by 'familiar form'? It's just that that is one of the bits that confused me. I really like your writing despite how short in length it is.
I received your request and I plan to review all of your work.
You have done an excellent job at putting emotion into such a short piece of writing. It also seems to have deeper meanings. I enjoy that you have managed to make it less explanatory than one would expect whilst still giving the reader the jist of what is going on.
I really liked this. It has a very deep impact but it is a little short and this limits the effect. Tell me, do you plan to continue this story or explain it in greater depth? I do not fully understand the reasons for the transformations and you get me all curious about that at the start. You are a really good writer and I expect great things. =^_^=
I enjoyed this story greatly, especially the come-up-ance at the end. I have always had a fondness of werewolves that has almost bordered on eroticism at time which seemed to come and go over the years so I really do like to see justice among lycanthropes. If this review has made me sound weird... I don't care.
I could try to do this. I was very disappointed because I got my friend to become a member of writing dot com but I didn't know that if you use the official link, it gets you community recognition. I missed out on some recognition there. I will probably try to get my best friend to join but he is a quirky character and I'm not sure that he will actually join.
How... depressing. Just as a good love poem should be. I am not a poetry type of person but anything you can read is good for cultivating literary skills. It's short but it makes an impression on the reader. I would give some gift points but I'm saving up. I apologise if this review wasn't helpful.
I can't believe this! Just because you can't post any more chapters doesn't mean that you don't have to keep reading my story. If you neglect your duties as my editor in chief, I shall put the construction of your oddity cogs on hiatus. I hope that it doesn't come to that. What's more is the fact that you have wasted a perfectly good portfolio space for this information, you could have put it at the end of a chapter!
Oh my god! I love your writing. I checked out your portfolio because you were kind enough to take time out of your day toread some of my writing and review it and I'm so glad that I did. There were parts in this story that made me almost want to cry. The imagery was inspiring and it makes you want to get up and do something! You have a very wide vocabulary and a talent for writing. I would have given this an award if I had enough gift points but as it happens, at the moment, I don't so take these points instead for your excellent work. I expect great things from you.
This is perhaps the longest poem I have ever read and it must have taken a great amount of effort to make it go for so long. Usually I am a bit iffy about poetry but I really enjoyed this and I think that you are very talented. I apologise if this review isn't helpful.
You must have spent a lot of time on making a story this long and because I have ADHD, I had trouble with the task of reading the whole thing but I did. At some points, I had trouble staying interested but that is probably because its not my type of thing. I believe that to the right people this could be an interesting project to pursue. I'm sorry if this review isn't helpful
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