Sorry to hear this. I hope you leave this person who is obviously toxic. Ive been with someone who is kind of the same but not quite as bad as what you describe here.
Besides all that I would say this was well written. Great words you chose as well. Kept me reading until the end.
It would be cool to absorb things. Dreams are so weird that they are quite funny. I am on medication for OCD and it causes me to dream every night. My doctor says I should start writing down my dreams.
This poem was beautiful. You have a real talent here. And a way with words. I enjoyed reading this. Nice flow and rhymes. A sad story about a little girl losing her father to war, but then gets a dog to make her feel safe again. You nailed this one.
A very beautiful poem indeed for the mentally challenged. This poem caught my eye because as I sit here in the tea shop tonight a mentally challenged girl with down syndrome walked in with her dad. They were going over the alphabet learning each letter.
Thanks for sharing, Megan. I enjoyed this poem. Great rhythm and flow. A beautiful poem about a Tiger. You may not be scared of one but I know I sure am! Haha.
Beautifully written poem Penelope about a mother's love for her children. I was raised by my grandparents, my grandmother was like a mother to me. Reading this reminds me of her. She passed away in '08 from cancer. Luckily I still have my grandfather left.
This poem has great rhymes and flow. You hit the spot with this one.
My favorite part:
"She put away the baby things
no longer do they fit
she gave away the rocker
upon which they sit"
Wow. A very powerful message here. So much beauty in something we do not like to have in our grass. I wonder why that is? Great poem Zeke. I enjoyed this one very much, as I do all of your poetry.
A beautiful poem. Im a huge Linkin Park fan. Saw them in concert in 08 here in Baltimore, MD. I was very sad when I heard of Chester's passing. I grew up listening to mostly Hip-Hop amd R&B from the 90s-2000's. I wasn't very open to listen to other genres until I first heard "One Step Closer" by Linkin Park. This poem was a beautiful dedication to his memory. You hit the spot with this one.
Thanks for sharing this. You wrote a beautiful poem here about the seasons. The rhythm and flow of this poem was spot on. I enjoyed reading this very much.
I used to enjoy going to the mall every weekend with my ex's brother. Him and I were pretty close. This poem reminds me of all the great memories I had hangingout with him. Thank you for sharing Zeke. This was great.
Oh my god. This poem hit the spot. I'm 30 years old. I grew up with my grandparents still live with my grandfather today. Me and my grandparents watched a station called TV Land it had allnthe classic. Munsters, All in The Family, Green Acres, Bonanza, beaver, amd one of my favorites Andy Griffith. The last time I watched classic television was about 6 months ago when I was using my tv as light for sleeping at night. I was watching All In the Family, Andy Griffith, and Green Acres and a few others that came on around that time. This poem took me back to my childhood with my grandmother who passed away in 2008 of lung cancer.
This poem reminds me of when my grandmother (who raised me) found out she had cancer. When we found out about her diagnosis I was shattered. And the part that hurt the most besides losing her was that there was nothing I could do to fix it. I relate to this poem very much.
They should put this poem on the back of peanut butter containers. A beautiful in depth poem about your love for peanut butter. The rhyming was beautiful with deep meaning.
I enjoyed this poem very, very much. Thank you for sharing.
This whole time while im reading, I thought it was about drugs. The needle, the numbness. Then it ends up being a dentist pulling a tooth. You tricked me! Congratulations.
I enjoyed this. The ending made the poem go from sad to funny.
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