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Review by Serena Chibi
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the idea and moral behind this but there were some writing errors (puntuation and grammar). Overall, a nice idea just needs a little proof reading, keep it up. I wish you nothing but the best, just trying to help a bit. Definitely keep writing though and I'll read the next one as well :)
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