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Review of Turkey Day  
Review by Wolfius
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi! I love the introduction of your story. It really got me interested in the Turkey Day massacre. I really love the part where the turkey comes back to life as ice thaws away and grabs a weapon, but then it hops back into the original spot .

I do have a suggestion. As you finish writing, it would help the flow and grammars of the story by proof reading. Check for capitalization and spelling.

Other than that, the story was funny and I enjoyed it. Keep writing! You’re doing great!


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