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11 Public Reviews Given
11 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I tend to review content and story itself more than proof read grammar and spelling. If I see something I will point it out. I prefer stories that are fictional, but am willing to review others.
I'm good at...
Catchong conflicts is a story. Things such as wrong character mentioned on something, to what seems to be an off action/reaction to something.
Favorite Genres
Science fiction, fantasy, adventure
Least Favorite Genres
Journalism
Public Reviews
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Review by Silki Knight
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I find this interesting. I don't read many story stories, but I like this one. I do wish there was a bit more to it. More emphasis on her feelings and fear. I know what she's feeling buy I don't feel it myself.I also noticed a few spelling errors, her instead here sort if things. There was also some places that it seems like there were two sentences that need some sort of punctuation in between them. These are more finer editing points. The story itself is interestingAnd I think it has great potential.


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Review by Silki Knight
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't read poems very often, but this one caught my eye. I like the way it flows, it has a very effective rhythm to the words. That is a big factor for me. It also has a faintly Poe feeling to it with the mourning aspect. Somewhat reminded me of Annabel Lee.

Overall, I enjoyed it. This is a lovely, well written piece.


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Review by Silki Knight
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A revolutionary trail in a revolutionary setting. This really is a splendid read. that the elder council is not truly what the spirits are taught and that the Presence is more award than even the elders know is cool. I would really like to read the full story is see how everything unfolds.
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Review by Silki Knight
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really find myself very fascinated by your characters and the story. The whole idea of this spirit world and the hierarchy of power within it is wonderful and I want to read more. You have created something quite unique and original. I hope you continue on with it.
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Review by Silki Knight
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story is building well. Again your details are well done. Giving enough to paint a clear.picture, but not so long winded as to be a bore. I like the way Vero tries to instruct Zarad in the lesson. There is a good analogy and it shows the reader a greater insight to Zarad as he struggles to understand.
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Review by Silki Knight
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am intrigued by the world you have created here. I lovebthe detail you put into it as well, I can truly visualize where they are and feel as though I am there with them. I like your choice of words, and the story flows very naturally. I look foreward to reading more. This is a most excellent start.
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