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Review by ibhya
Rated: E | (5.0)
o-o what happens next? oh come on i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
by the way what happened with matt,was he dumped by a girl and killed himself in frustation???
aliah's dad and brother both look so cold-hearted,they didn't even attend her funeral,or maybe there was also a reason for that.
ibhya *Smile*
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Review by ibhya
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!
I can totally relate to your poem.When i try to write,i get really confused over what to write.I lose the sense of time while writing.
Writing is just like exploring your mind.
I love writing,I love your poem.
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Review by ibhya
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Woah!! this is a really dark poem.It really describes the mind of someone about to commit suicide.After you have hurt yourself there is no looking back,even if you regret it,you will fall into darkness.
Did you write this when you were really depressed?
I hope you recovered.
Please keep on writing!!
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Review by ibhya
Rated: E | (3.0)
It is a really nice poem.It describes the feelings of a woman (i guess) who feels betrayed when her partner loses his job and she has to work for fulfilling his needs.She feels as though it is a duty even though it is not really mandatory for her.Her work seems even more painful when she has to hear the constant demands of her partner.
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