Hello friend. If profound is what you are going for in this work, I think you've achieved it. Of course, different readers may interpret in different ways, but I believe that your poem can reach many. I like it. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. SG
This was a very straight forward and enjoyable. I got nostalgic! The piece made me think of my own youth and how exciting it was to get the shiny new dime (or nickle, or quarter, etc.). Very good. -SKG
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