Masque of Licentia's (staysick) Reviews

I very rarely give five starts to a poem, though I do enjoy them and write them myself.

This was a very touching piece, and had ALOT of levels to go thru I think.

I love the last two lines, They really bring it together, and have so many meaning to interpret.

I have a Psychological Story Contest I am re-opening. Look for it in a day or two, and please please enter it.

JR

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

4

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3979583

Review of The Luring

Review by Masque of Licentia

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

I love reading your poetry, It expresses your points well, and has a certain rhythm for them. This one in particular I enjoy, because it alludes to the death, the dark, and the questioning of completing his goal here. I will continue to read your stuff, thank you again.

JR

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

5

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3979582

Review of The Dark Cathedral

Review by Masque of Licentia

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

Great poem, and it is dark. Thank you.

JR

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

6

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3979580

Review of "I spit my last breath at thee."

Review by Masque of Licentia

Rated: 18+

| (3.0)

This story, I see what you are trying to do. I could see it from the beginning. If that was your plan, than great. I mean no disrespect at all. There were issues with this story that made the flow of it difficult at times, mostly punctuation. Hey, I'm not an expert, just an amateur writer. The ending was known and did not give a real twist that left you waiting for more, or satisfied you. The whole progression based on this rabbit can be sympathized with Easter coming up, but, that is it. I don't mean to be rude at all.

JR

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

7

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#2259434

Review of Listen

Review by Masque of Licentia

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

This was a great poem, my interpretation, I can feel the hurt, pain, love, honesty, that comes with beeing young. And beeing young, life moves very quick. But, as you state, in the end you still lived your life, and thus all of the trial and errors, you still won. becuase you experienced it. Thank you.