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Review of Game of Life  
Review by TheWizenedWriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a fantastic poem! You, my friend (if i can call you that,) have a way with words. I can really relate with what you've written down. I mean jeez its as though you've read my mind. Okay....now for the critiquing. Wait!!! I'm not sure if there is anything wrong here!!! Gad Zooks you've written an extraordinary poem.

Seriously though I really appreiciate what you've given me through this work.

I'm not sure what kind of rhyme Pain and Gained are, but maybe you do. Get back to me on that one I'm curious about the rhyme.

Thank-You Gorja Blanch!
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