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Review of The Apology  
Review by Suewrite
Rated: E | (3.5)
I was captivated by the story until the end, which disappointed me. "You're not going to believe this" seemed so prosaic and cliche. Other than that, I enjoyed the descriptions, the setting, and the character. There were a few extra words that jarred a bit -- like "blinked his eyes" -- what else would he blink? Don't answer that, could be anything in sci-fi, but still, not needed here.
Good premise, definitely needs a better conclusion.
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