I love this one too, Dev. It's got a cute twist at the end that not only seems to fool the reader but, the author as well!!! LOL!! I love it! Very creative.
Oh my GOSH!!!! That was probably one of the BEST madlibs I’ve EVER read in my entire life. I LOVE IT!!! That is so amazing what it is based off of!! I couldn’t have asked for a better laugh on WDC. Thank you so much for this!
This is relevantly creative. I'd recommend a slight grammar check in the future but as far as I'm concerned with this poem, it reads fluently. It's very perceivable. It's also remarkable for a beginner in writing. So, all put together, congrats!!
First of all, that was an outstanding piece of work you’ve created! I’m amazed at how plain yet creative it is. It’s so descriptive and interestingly detailed. I love the point-of-view this is written from. It was as if I myself, the reader, could put myself in either Ru’s or Myra’s position and really feel the emotion going between them. I felt Ru’s pain when Myra called to break up as well as Myra’s joy when she realized Ru hadn’t changed in ten years. Once again, I’m very appreciative of the point-of-view because it’s very creative to write a piece presenting to such a creative audience. I really enjoyed it and will be sure to mark it as a favorite!!
I really understand what you're saying in this entry. I'd agree that one of my biggest weaknesses is my own mind (it's dangerous, if not contained.) My number one is probably either 'doubt' or 'temptation.' But I wouldn't say you should "take the punches as they come," because that seems like "goin' with the flow." And that can be risky depending on what river you're going down. There is a way to alter situations significantly through your own will and lead your life. :)
I usually stink at detecting hidden symbols/meanings, but this poem was so straight-forward and touching, I think I see it and it's beautiful. I love how simple and true this is. It really is a clear definition of one's struggling life or often our society today. Awesome job! I love it!
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