This is a very beautiful story. Though it was sad, it made me think back to when my mother was going through the cancer that had killed her. It brought a tear to my eye. You've done an excellent job here, and I hope you're proud of it. Please continue to good work!
I absolutely loved this poem. You can feel the emotion put into this piece. I know what it's like to wait for someone, as I am doing that right now. It's very beautiful, and one of my favorites. Please continue the wonderful work. You are very good at it!
Wow. Very nice. Didn't expect the ending though, but I believe that made it more better. Kind of cruel though, but I still liked it. You've done an excellent job here.
Great work I say.
Hope you have a great Holiday Season! Be safe! And continue the great work!
This really caught my attention. I just got out a relationship with problems just like you've described. I understand everything you put into this writing. I can relate deeply to it. Thank you for writing it. It really brought back emotions I've held in for 5 months. Thank you again.
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