Its seems to be based in Australia, but that's not important. What the poem makes me feel is a warmth. I feel like its a good memory and a good place. That is the important take away I received. thank you for putting it into the world.
Wow. First it honestly got some moisture going in them eyes. I related so much the the Billy character. The wanting to make my family proud, prove yourself, also the apathy early in life with video games and seeming to go no where. The Father was relatable reminding me of my father. The mother who just wanted to love her son without condition. The end was unfortunate, and the fracture it put in the family. I would love to see how this issue is resolved. It is so human and real. I hope there can be a happy ending.
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