What a well thought up idea; intrinsic with determination and the quest for success; oh how I wish I had of come up with this idea *writing it down*. Hopefully you won’t mind me stealing your idea – some of my Items I so desperately want review and read. Certainly well done! (incase you haven’t noticed, I’m green with envy .
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A true example of a dream - a dream we all seek and desire, to feel loved. I feel this work is crafted well, keep on writing, and keep up the good work. Make your dream come true. Your imagery is intense an wonderful.
Write on.
Tagra.
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This is a lovley, quick and to the point "Salsa de Tejas"
I like it bacause it is informative, easy and it's not burdened down with too many comments. So well done - I intend on trying this out. See, I think even I could make this (plus I love hot food)
Write on!
Tagra.
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Wow, this is a really sad story. The description, the feel, everything is so strong and powerful. I like the style. I only noticed one spelling mistake: ...started top open his mouth... (to, insted of top)
Your style is so good, just one thing, do you write anything else appart from death scenes? (THere is a chance you lost your upgrade, or somthing like that - Ihope that's not the case) Not that I didn't like it, just - sometimes a non death scene is nice..
Well done - write on!
Tagra.
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I totaly understand! I love music as well; it is clear in this item that you too love the atmosphere of playing music. I personly enjoy every style of of music, every beat. THere is a point that I feel deservs some discution; you mention TV and internet replacing music; I do not feel this is the case. For most people I know play music while on the computor, TV in most cases has a tune amongst the action. And EVERYONE I know plays music, they dance to it, they love it...
Write on!
Tagra.
I must say the prospect isn't very nice, but if they did invade, who would stop them..
Any way, quite in interesting style - sort of the opposite of war of the worlds.
well done, I really like the discription of a virus taking over a cell.
Write on!
Wow! you are good! As I read my eyes were paralised to the page. I dare not close my eyes to blink. I feel it is so cleverly done.
Honestly I beleve you could make a novel or book on your race here. Do keep writing - I look forward to reading more of your work.
Write on!
The start is kind of typical, but also enchanting.
I do like the first few lines, but have you ever coincided making them rhyme? (They are already sort of poetry) I just suggest something like:
“Long ago, in a land now forgotten, a Princess lived among the world's only mythical creatures,/
A unicorn that could grant wishes to those who asked lived among the mystical Features.”
I just hastily put that together – just a suggestion.
In fact because of the style of your story, you could almost make the entire thing poetry?
But at any rate, your story is very nice. Like a classic fary tale. It has that feel of magic to it.
Keep on writing!
A poem intrinsic with change.
The reader feels the force of the metaphores you used, like:
"The places we used to go are turning into dust,
the people that we used to know are dissapearing in front of us."
I love that metaphore.
The entire poem is like a picture of change or time.
Like time passing, as the pub is about to close.
The Final lines drive home the feeling of change, and perhaps uncertanty.
THave you ever wanted to live your faverout adventure?
Well here is your chance!
I love this interactive story - because you car really do whatever you like!
There are guns in the federal age - and you can mess up whatever story you like.
I like it how the main maker of this story has really captured the feel of the storys. (The othere writers are good to!)
Check it out - even add a chapter.
It is your choice...
Anything that includes Pondering - I like. From paradox to anything that requires the mind really - is exiting to me.
That is why I like this little story so much.
Wondering why? Read and find out - don't worry - you don't have to ponder.
The only thing I didn't like is - we didn't dind out why the little worm... killed it's self.
So now I have to sit here pondering... why...
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