Hello!! I think so!!! I was encouraged!!!Recently, I knocked on the door of "Writing.com". I am Japanese and a beginner of English.I dont know what will happen!!New world for me!! I like your sentence,"We shouldn't miss chances at those. As each day passes, some number of opportunities pass us by" .I like it!!
It is a beautiful and impressive short story!!The brightness of the boyhood is expressed on the ball and one string guitar. It is one string.It draws my attention and it is attractive. As a picture, it is dazzling！
The sight floats on my mind. I remembered my sense of childhood. I like your sentence ,-"their futures. Maybe one day some would make it big, maybe not. Most of them probably wouldn't. Lucky they don't know that, I guess."
I enjoyed reading your novel!
Cold!!! Cold story!!! Severe that it is cold!!!! The season will be warm from now on. In Japan, there is a long rainy season in June!1 Thank you for review of my novel "Playing Guitar on the benchi"
I also wrote a new novel "I used to sing a song". I'm glad if you read it!!
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