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Review of Amanda Lynne  
Review by Shirley Janisse
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well written and hearfelt. I could feel your struggle as you tried to describe your love for her. Very poetic and very well ryhmed! Great Job!
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Review of Somnolence  
Review by Shirley Janisse
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I found your poem to be very descriptive. As I was reading it, I felt as if you were portraying to the reader that death to you is the ending of life and hope. I'm not sure if the word skin would be the correct use in your last stanza, since your feelings, dreams, desires, and fears are kept within the soul. I would consider "soul" as the word to use only because you refer to your feelings, desires, ect. as being lost to the void. I believe you are very talented. I look forward to reading more of your work. I hope you will also take the opportunity to read and review some of my work.
Sincerely,
Shirley Janisse
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