This poem makes me think of many symbolic ideas about this worm. At first, I took it literally, but then I thought of other things the worm could be. I liked the rhyming you used. If this is a specific type of poem, please reply and tell me. Good job!
I love this cute poem! The rhyming sounds very nice and I like where you go with it. In some places, I have found where the poem switches scenes, so it isn’t quite as smooth as an untouched lake. However, this was a very fun read for me, and thanks for sharing it. Good job!
Wow. This poem makes me appreciate how beautiful and uncharted space is. I like your use of vocabulary and the rhymes you used in the Burns Stanza theme. I think it’s intriguing how the poem flows from adjectives in the beginning that thins out at the end. Good work!
This poem really warms my heart. I love how you used many adjectives in this poem and that really makes a difference for me. Also, the way you bolded certain words made it really enjoyable and made me to think about it. Thanks for writing and sharing this!
Wow I’ve never seen a poem like this. I also have never thought from a bench’s point of view, so this poem made me think more about many inanimate objects and what their stories could be. It appears you followed a specific type of poem; if so, please tell me. Thank you for taking your time to write and share this!
This poem is amazing! I love to write haikus myself and I can really appreciate this beautiful haiku. This haiku feels symbolic to me because yes, it is Winter, but it could also mean the Winters in our own lives. I thank you for taking your time to write and share this beautiful haiku. Keep up the good work!
love this story! It touches my heart. I also love how you befriended him. The kindness you show makes me glad there are people like you out in this world. The poem is wonderful and amazing I just can’t describe it with a handful of words. Your rhyming is beautiful and the story in the poem is so tear-prompting. Thank you so much for this!
I love this poem! It puts a spin on the nursery rhyme and I also think your rhyming is great. The vocabulary you used is quite wonderful. The title is perfect and I like how in the beginning the lines are shorter but they get longer towards the end. I really enjoyed reading this! -Toucan
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