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Review of A Soldier's Pain  
Review by trafick
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hooah! Powerful words that speak the truth about us veterans. Thank you for serving our country bravely and honorably. Where would this country be without us veterans?

God Bless you,
Korri US Army Disabled Vet



Have you forgotten what happened on 9-11-01? I will NEVER FORGET!
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Review of Say No More  
Review by trafick
Rated: E | (4.0)
It was a good attempt at writing poetry. I find that the stanzas are choppy; they don't seem to flow along. Have you written poetry a lot? It is one of my favorite genres. This poem needs a little rhythm to it to make it a piece that is smooth to read.

Good luck with your contest!
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Review of Short Poem  
Review by trafick
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,

Sometimes short and sweet are the way to go. A very descriptive poem and wonderful tribute to your wife. I don't see any grammatical or spelling troubles. Nicely done.

Keep on writing,
best wishes,
trafick

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Review of Killua_Gon1  
Review by trafick
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a great c-note! The characters are hilarious to look at. What a great idea to use as a c-note. It would be fun to send that on to someone whose piece was reviewed. Awesome job. Thank you so much for sharing it with me.

Best wishes and Happy Writing!
trafick
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Review of Cowgirl Up sig  
Review by trafick
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice! I like it a lot being a small town country girl myself. I still love to see those Ws on some cowboy's butts... gotta love that W... Wrangle butts drive me nuts.

Back to the sig... very nicely down. The colors are wonderful and the horse and rider ROCK!

I loved it.. Thanks for sharing it.

trafick
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Review of Barely Breathing  
Review by trafick
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
wow! what a poem! I hate to say it but I've been there myself. Not a fun way to live. You can feel the emotional roller coaster ride of emotions in this poem.I dont' see any grammatical issues with it. In fact, I have nothing to say but GREAT!

Very nicely done... truly gets out the emotions of a person with bipolar disorder.

God Bless,
trafick
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Review of past  
Review by trafick
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very nice start but I have this feeling of wanting more. This has the potential to be an excellent poem. Add more to it... be more descriptive...

Every person you meet has a story to tell,
a tale of their own personal hell.

What is the story? the personal hell?

This feels like a piece written with emotions. Use those emotions to expand on this poem. Give the reader insight into the struggle and the pain.

that determinsdetermines whether your soul will heal

Hopefully this review will be helpful to you. Overall, I like it... just needs some "tweaking" *Smile*

Best wishes,
trafick
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Review by trafick
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nicely done. Loved the rhyming and the flow of it. Maybe a bit on the short side... but sometimes short and sweet is the way to be.

Keep on writing. Best wishes,
trafick
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Review of You can  
Review by trafick
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it! What a great picture to use. Very colorful and I love the saying, "Who Can? You Can!!!" coming from a Toucan. Nice job!

best wishes,
trafick
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Review by trafick
Rated: E | (4.5)
Smokey is very cute! Must be very hungry. I love the purple collar. Thank you for sharing the photo. I have ferrets. Would love a cat but hubby says he is allergic to them, but I know he just hates them *Frown*

The picture itself is good. If you want it to really stand out, though, try putting a different color down under the dish... a towel or sheet. To make it stand out more.

best wishes,
trafick
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Review of Interactive Stuff  
Review by trafick
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cool folder set up with your polls. I looked at each of the poll and survey in it. They were fun to do.

Best wishes,
trafick
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Review by trafick
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Fun activity. Thank you for running it. Have a very interesting storyline working on it.

Best wishes,
trafick
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