I liked this story, I thought it had a good flow to it and you were left wanting to hear what happens next. It seems to be based on Greek or Roman mythology and I have got an embryonic interest in this, know a little but need to learn more. Haven’t read much fantasy except for a few books but want to read more, fallen goddesses and the conflict they face on Earth which you have drawn here seem to have whetted my appetite although I may not be keen on stories on elves and goblins (just a preference). have read some science fiction but need to look at fantasy too. I thought the chapter was the right sort of length for a prologue.
This poem has depth and rhymes well and I think that the added quotes are also food for thought, I like the imagery of the poem which I think is simple, concrete and evocative
I liked this poem, it has some good imagery e.g." inky cyber seas, a smoky bar for the sociable, maybe even a good natured strip tease, sail the cyber seas uncharted and jetty black, a stream of bits nad bytes, bitts and bights..." etc. One of the advantages of Writing.com is the anonymity but would be nice to know a little about you in the Bio Block as much as you would be willing to share. As a reviewer I've come across says "keep writing!"
I liked this poem, shows a story progression. I think it's called a narrative poem. I'm a new reviewer so forgive me that I don't say much- I have to work on my reviewing skills.
I liked this story, it has action, adventure, mystery and suspense, quite a lot of characters but I think it works in this case (I read somewhere that some short stories should have maximum four characters) and it sums up what young people can be like: risk-taking and adventurous
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