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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I gave this a 3.0 only because of the very last sentence seemed threatening. I have written a poem and a short story similar to what I believe you are trying to say. I felt this was very touching, and believe we expire more from a positive and purposeful prospective. I would have given this a 5 if it ended on a positive note.
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