good work keep it up. your writing is inspirational. all thoughts are expessed with such discription and feeling. madness and tormoil and happiness and fear. trueth in this fiction. it's another world. a place i'd like to be, and it is neet that u put the whole work here.
a well put story. why was this dentist fictisious? i didn't quite get that, nor exactly what the symbol, was it the nazi, or a chinees symbol, i don't know really, you don't exsplain. what happened after, you kind of left the story blank in the end. other then that it was good.
i know exactly this feeling. i always find myself doing this. looking back at what i did, how i did it, why i did it, and of course; where did i go how did i get there. bad memories, good memories; all have brought tears, or laughs, and i know that some times i get stuck way back there. so this is good advice.
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