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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, what an ending! I definitely didn't see that coming. I could almost picture everything unfolding as you described and then the twist at the end totally got me. Good job! The only thing that got me was how would a toothbrush shatter but in context of the dream state it all made sense again!
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This is so sweet! The Peter Pan references is what really gets me though.. I love that movie! The letter was cute but the little poem is what makes it! I can almost picture the two of you and obviously I have no idea what either of you look like! Enjoy Neverland.. and never grow up!


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