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Review of blue water  
Review by Peter Harrison
Rated: E | (4.0)
this is a deep message and I think is a good one. People should take this to hart as being ones self is the way to find fulfillment in life.
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Review by Peter Harrison
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well this is was unexpected but well thought out and a good read. I think I should look at more of your work.
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Review of Smile :)(:  
Review by Peter Harrison
Rated: E | (1.0)
um this sounds like your trying to make an emo persion smile that is distent and hates her self (if i where emo i probaly get wors hearing that its better to try and fake a smile then trying to think of things that make/made me happy in stead of telling me to smile even if it feals hoples.
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Review by Peter Harrison
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow this story just drew me in and now I want to go to the out back. Nicely done! did this really happen? This was so good I could feel the emosions you felt well you did those things.


ps. i asked if this really hapend because I want to say I cant beleave u did all that and could have all that fun (okay I can beleave it but I'm in shock because I could not do it). this made me feel like I was really there with you guys!
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