This was a nice story. I like the idea, and you develop it well, but you make it seem more complicated than it is. I think that if you go through and try to make it shorter, you'll end up with a more powerful story. For example, you don't need to say 'he said,' 'I said,' etc. every time, and you could even stand not to describe things quite as much. You can trust your reader to add some of that. Also, watch contradicting yourself. You say that the knock on the door is 'cold and hollow,' but he greets you 'warmly,' also, you 'marvel at his words,' but they also 'seem superficial.' I'm being picky; this was a very good essay, and you may not even want to change it. Good job, and keep writing.
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