I like the way you have written this poem. It is very cleverly done. I also could relate very well to the content. 'You took the words right out of my mouth'! It also makes me a little bit more curious about you. It kept me captivated and interested. Great poem!
Hahaha, I really enjoyed this piece, and it made me laugh out loud. It was also so very sweet. If I was single, and saw that on a dating site..well..I'm sure I would be in a line of many. Lovely and light-hearted. Inspires me to write with a less serious tone. Therefore, inspiring. Thank you for your poem.
I loved this piece! I was so caught up with the content that I would have to go back and read it again if I was to actually review any of the grammar. It spoke to me on a personal level. It is positive and inspiring. Written in an interesting way that captivates the reader. I like your style!
Halenutcocoa? Or may I call you Hazlenutcocoa! which by the way is a wonderful name and makes me want to go and grab a Ferrero Rocher out of the fridge! Yum. Lovely write up you have there, I enjoyed reading about you. Looking forward to more posts from you Hales. Happy writing!
Good for you! I too experience social anxiety. I too have recently discovered my passion for writing. A wonderful outlet for many pent up logical and at times illogical emotions. You have taken those first few steps and you are on your way in your adventurous, magical new world. You are opening the doors to amazing possibilities, experiences and discoveries. Go you! Keep us up to date with your journey!
Oh wow, I really loved your piece. I love a good, simple ghost story. This particular theme has always fascinated me. It was very well written. Straight forward, descriptive and easy to read. Well done, please keep writing!
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