I am a Grandma three times and this is fantastic. what an imagination you have with your talent you shoudn't be changing diapers ha ha.
I loved the humor of it an since it's so true that makes it even better.
Do Write On... you have real talent!
Granny, Windsong
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Hi Whisper, It's Windsong. I've just read Autumn Flower. This is magnificent writing, an emotional tug at the heart of a woman who obviously needed love to heal. I am overwhelmed by your honesty of her and the story behind it all.
Your description of her before and after was awesome. The love between the two of you that grew with love and nurturing beautiful.
What a talent you have for writing! Keep writing, I'm reading.
Sincerely, Windsong
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What a wonderful poem! Your imagery imaginative. I would change but one thing...the snail awakens now.. that's all!!
This is my personal opinion...
Sincerely Windsong
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You captured my heart and reeled me in for this lovely poem of 'Paper'. It certainly is the one thing that cannot be forgotten nor forgiven. What a genius way of expression on your part. Do Write On, I'll be reading.
Sincerely, Windsong
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I'm awarding you a five star on this very short poem. What you have is great!However, I would have liked to hear more about the barrel racing and the horse & rider. Three or more stanzas would really make this a poem. It is only a quote as it stands.
I encourage you to write more and make your poem longer.
This is offered as a suggestion. Write on!
Sincerely, Windsong
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A very interesting slant on the making of an afgan and life. How the colors were woven in and out, until she made a mistake. A wonderful play on words with this one! Great imagination! I enjoyed it!
Write On!
Sincerely, Windsong
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I was extremely taken with this poem, a heartfelt, sentimental journey for this boy. Your imaging was terrific and tookk me there, watching them load him into the car. Tears came to my eyes.
do Write ON!
Sincerely, Windsong
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What a great Poem especially for those of us who are Seniors and forget. sometimes more than others. I have a poem I wrote about my ageing mother if you care to visit my port; It's called simply; "She forgets"
I can relate to your poem and enjoyed your thoughts on the subject of ageing and forgetting.
Sincerely, Windsong
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I love your poem! I am a Mother and I'm sure I would feel lost if I were to think my son was missing and presumed dead. You definately captured me with this poem. Your rhyme and rythm are wonderful! Thank you for sharing!
Write On!
Sincerely, Wndsong
Hi Countrymom, I am a newbie here and just dropped in to say hello. I wish you all the luck in the world on your books and poems. It takes a lot of time and thought to put it all together. I have been writing for about 24 years and I find it very time consumming to re write all of my poetry and get it here on WDC but it's worth the toil and very rewarding when someone rates your work and sends you encouragement. Thank you so much for your support!
sincerely,Windsong (Patricia)
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I have a poem I wrote about my ageing mother if you care to visit my port; It's called simply; "She forgets"