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Review of "UNGH!"  
Review by liquidstones22
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was unexpected and funny. I enjoyed it.
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Review by liquidstones22
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is fun thanks for posting this one.
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Review by liquidstones22
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Meh.
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Review by liquidstones22
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Your story popped up for me in a read and review suggestion. I can tell by your writing style that you must be young or a teenager? There is some punctuation and sentence structuring that you need to work on but I believe that comes from maturity. While I was reading it I really was curious to find out if boxing is something you want to do or actually do or if it's just part of the story you made up. I encourage you to keep writing especially if it's something you like to do. All and all it was not bad. Cheers!
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