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Review by winter
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i love this.It rly gets to u when u read it.
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Review by winter
Rated: E | (4.5)
It was wonderful but one thing, he feels tired there was a gap between feels and tired.Other then that loved it,good work and keep it up :)
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Review by winter
Rated: E | (2.5)
I liked the first part but 2 for joy was hard to understand, it was very out there but other then that it was good :)

Good luck on your next one!!!!
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Review by winter
Rated: E | (4.0)
Im reading chapter 2 now,and i love the plot but the 1 thing that i didnt under stand is how your writing it, its hard to follow along if it had more info on the ppl and what is happing on a scene. But other then that i so far love it and i hope u injoy yourself writing and hope u keep your head up and keep writing:)
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