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Review of the girl  
Review by I.J.Parks
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are great! Twisting themes an amazing talent! Polish the format/editing and send me a copy of your first book! Great talent here people!
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Review of eye-contact  
Review by I.J.Parks
Rated: E | (4.5)
*standing applause* You need some editing, but you took me back unnumbered years, and for a moment I was a child again and fragile. Very very well written in undertone and semi-Freudian theme.
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Review of Don't care.  
Review by I.J.Parks
Rated: E | (5.0)
"As free as the meadow wind, and all the knowing." I.J.Parks Keep smiling =)
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Review of My blue eyes  
Review by I.J.Parks
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very good, I don't believe in editing another writer's work, but I will give some advise. Don't worry about rhyme attempt freehanded prose, and edit down. Once you have the idea of a poem you can make it flow much easier. I loved someone with blue eyes a long time ago, and "My blue eyes cry cascading crystals " very very touching theme and imagery.
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Review of She  
Review by I.J.Parks
Rated: E | (3.5)
I'll be honest, it needs polishing, but I see it is a draft. Your theme is gut-wrenching. A heart breaking ballad of prose. Keep up the good work!
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