hey there, well.really applaud your unique style on this novel.been glued since the first chapter and showing no signs of letting go or logging out anytime soon!
day by day this gets more intricately captivating!...read word for word through the seven chapters and wish that you keep going on!
suavely structured and highly addictive! Just stop with the suspense already!ha.just kidding.
taking nothing away from you,i think you could get better with the descriptions!keep writing!
well, great and emotional piece i have to admit.giving you credit for that.
laudable piece in addition to that.i however find and think that you have compressed too much emotion in a few lines, a task which you could have done better in more stanzas.
taking nothing away from you though, write on!
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