This was brilliant, the structure of your poetry truly gave a sense of stillness as my eyes read each line and eventually towards the analogous end. Like a pendulum bob within a floor clock, heightening the anticipatory senses, like something out of the ordinary was about to happen. Again, brilliant!
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