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Rated: E | (4.0)
Random click from "read a newbie", pleasantly surprised. I like the way the second line in each stanza (if that's the correct term) is a negative, resolved by the rest. I can almost hear the chord change to a minor, if this were set to music. Only thing I personally would like to see would be a period on the last line, as I feel like that would close the poem, voice-wise. Keep it up!
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