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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1204349
Unfinished, vibrant, alive ~ hold fast the wonder of youth ~ A Triolet
A few rough edges

A few rough edges ever stay
Unfinished, yet the treehouse stands.
Though set with care, the branches sway;
A few rough edges ever stay
Unpolished; youth holds age at bay
With sap of joy on gnarled hands;
A few rough edges ever stay
Unfinished, yet the treehouse stands.

© 2007 manga_kate

Poetic Form ~ Triolet ~ Eight-line rhyming poem; the first two lines repeat; ABaAabAB (AB = the refrain).

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