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Rated: E · Poetry · Experience · #1240996
at least this is how I remember it!
1:31 in the afternoon
nice day, warm, sunny
no worries, floatin around, havin a snack

1:33.....i can feel some...pressure
a little uncomfortable, not gonna lie
pushing down and i can feel it

1:35 and it's getting worse it hurts
i don't like it, make it stop
i can't take it anymore

1:37 and im getting angry now
i see some light and i forget the pain
i surrender to it, thinking it's over

1:39 and someone is touching me
they take ahold of me and the pressure helps me out
it feels so cold, i think im dying...but, it's really just the beginning
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