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Rated: E · Poetry · Religious · #1482063
A rewrite of The Lord's Prayer.
Towards There

Oh all that is,
We know you by so many different names.

Surrendering to all that you impart,
in flesh as well as in the spirit realm.

Help us feed our family,
and help us know the way of amnesty,
as we forgive the ones who underwhelm,

please help us with our cravings and our blames,
deliver us from loving’s counterpart.



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