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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1483865
Telling someone special how you feel. This is a line-for-line response to anothers poem.
You are Sol, bringing day from night
The rainbow's spectrum in you I see
You are the joyous hymns in my head
If only you could hear me

You are that love scene we both saw
So sensual I left halfway through
You are the treasure I dream about
A rapture for which I've longed

You are the Angel atop my tree
So different, so sweet, so nice
You are the strings in my heart's music
So soulful and important

You are the gold in my heart's closet
Hidden, so I alone may see it
Beside you I go unnoticed
My pride swells at that

You are my Pacifica, calm and serene
Though wonders abound in your depths
Are you surprised at what I see?

You are a snow flake from the sky
None among the others the same
You emblazon my day

Your leaving makes it worse
You cast me to the ground
Will I see you ever again?

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