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A love that feels like a dream,
A type of love that only we can see.
A between us that is so strong,
Why does everyone say it's wrong?
You are my bestfriend and I am yours,
This love of ours is so pure.
You may hold my hand and I'll hold yours,
In your arms i feel like i can soar.
My heart screams in agony when your away,
With you I will always stay.
I will stand beside you through thick and thin,
We both know this love is no sin.
From you I will never part,
For you are the one with the key to my heart.
Babe, i can not wait till the day i become your wife,
You are the one I'll cherish for the rest of my life.