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Rated: E · Poetry · Romance/Love · #1608611
Quick poem. Please critique.
It's funny how
one unexpected dream
can make you fall in love.
I promised myself that I
would never put myself through this again
it's not worth the torment,
so I tell myself
"She is just an illusion"
and
"It's just a chemical process"
but deep down
I would still give my life to her.

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